Reading may become difficult, I apologise for this and will try to plan better in future pages on how to avoid making the dialogue bubbles so confusing.
(NOTE: in fact I am going to have to just split these comics back into 2 seperate pages, which might be difficult, but this size is just too small to read)
(NOTE2: Had to cut the picture in half and just hope they stick together without big line stabbing through the middle)
(NOTE3: Actually I ended up going to Imageshack! They let you upload images without resizing them, WIN! WIN! But I'm unsure if I'll put pages together like this again in the future, just colouring 2 at once was kinda tough, it's like you need to keep urself at an easy going pace)
They've returned to the girls parents house, now our strange protagonist makes his way into the house
It should be quite important, to me at least, if not to anyone making comics, to put some thought into each and every panel, many comics focus on expressing as much as they can, such as they give characters really dynamic poses or stretch their mouths when their shouting to better emphasize their action. I think I will try to explore emotion, if I could ever get as much emotion as even Oda who creates One Piece I would feel pretty good for my work perhaps, for he is able to put emotion into one piece, without needing to kill characters unlike so many other shonen jump series.
I was also tempted to put a load of insane babbling dialogue coming out of the antagonists dreamscape, in the 4th panel, but thought I'd leave it out for now, maybe later I'll get a better oppurtunity to put it in.
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