am working on the attrocity, Iv jumped into the 3rd chapter though, because I feel like working on this chapter more than I feel like completing the 2nd.

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You might have noticed there may never be any consistent string of updates, oh well, in years time this will be ok since there will be so many pages for you to read at once, but since it's still early in the comics evolution I guess it sucks a bit for anyone who actually likes this comic! My apologies.

The Attrocity - Chapter 2 - Page 3

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I'm happy that I have been getting people to go for the vote incentive, it also tells me people are visiting this place, which in turn motivates me to keep coming back here to work on this comic, as farfetched as it is becoming

I am also happy that I finally got my 1st chapter proof read, soon I will update the bad dialogue, and then I will draw a suitable front cover for the story, then I will go to this comic publishing site I saw and publish it! I'm thinking of taking the copies to my local comics store in Brighton and possibly up to the comic stores in London. I wonder if anyone online would ever order any... Never know, never say no! Haha

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Got to keep at it, bear with it.

Chapter 2 - Page 1

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The first page of the 2nd chapter, let's just say somethings will deliberately change for the sake of creating a different experiance.
I want each chapter to stand out by themselves as a journey of their own, and we'll explore where they go, I would also like the style to change and force me to experiment in new directions.
When this chapter is complete, it should get a halloween feel, as the colours are definately themed after halloween illustrations! You shall soon see what I mean.

BTW, I updated the vote incentive if you'd care to see a profile of the defeated villain from the 1st chapter.

Page 29-30

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When I originally sketched "Millers" character, in different clothes mind you, the top right panel was the pose I gave him the very first time I drew him, I was trying to use funnier shapes to stylise faces at the time, otherwise usually you get a generic head shape as you see with Norrington.

To me, this page seemed really boring... Maybe you'll think the backgrounds too plain, or its the lack of the funky weird stuff I usually put on the pages featuring the monster! Haha, well, at least I've almost finished this chapter, and I'm already doing some experiments while I'm thinking "What shall I do next chapter" >=3 you'll be pulling "oh dear" faces.

Page 27-28

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Next page! 3rd* last page for this chapter I promise!
Also, I was busy on mondays and fridays, but now I've free'd myself up, so I'll have that much more spare time to work on things, including this comic!

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I'm slow, been so slow...

But next page is here, it's so here... I have to work now, gotta keep working, though I feel tired, it's so fuuuuuun, it's so fuuuuuuun

BTW I will change my vote incentive pictures each month... So let it encourage you to hit it from time to time to time to time!

Brief scene change, 3 pages left to this chapter!
PHEW, I almost uploaded it without putting the wallpaper on the walls (again)!

Leave comments people!

The attention button says "press me"

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Sometimes I'm not sure if what I've drawn is showing the right messages that I wish to get accross, this is definately one of those pages, I'm half unsure if it's even complete, maybe time and practice will help with these kind of pages... Now time to start wrapping this chapter up! Fights over folks XD lol

On this note, I have 2 places opened up, a webcomic site for this comic, and a top webcomics place!

The Attrocity Comic Series!

Page 15-16

Maybe if I'm a good enough artist you will be able to read this and understand what is happening without me needing to explain what's happening... I'll try to patiently wait and find out.

Page 13-14

I spose I should say something merry for today. So merry christmas to anyone reading this.

I have been given a laptop, it also counts as a birthday gift I'm told, it will give me more time to work at least.

I'm already thinking about my new years resolutions, what kind of plans can I possibly make for next year, it's hard though, I would say I'd like to be with some one I like, but I don't want to get confident and full of hope just because I usually get my hopes crushed everytime I do get my confidence and hope up. If only I could be more talented, intelligent, and have a more positive outlook on life, if only...

Practice 1

A quick practice done completely digitally, usually the line art would at least be done on paper.

This is meant to be a lighter humoured moment, just taking the time to remind myself what the characters are like and go durr about it. It also gives you a small insight to the steps this comic goes through, it's not perfectly correct to how I do things but it gives you an idea.

Attrocity page 9-10

Maybe I shouldnt take so long with the dialogue boxes, the first chapter of this story may forever be seen as a trainwrecking experimental experiance, as each and every page will keep trying to do something different. I'd hope the test is big enough, but I fear the pictures are harder to notice because of the speech bubbles! Oh when will I win...

I also fear that I would get told off for the first panel, but I also hope you will recognise that this isn't me saying "this is my art, let me draw what I want", I also hope to express that it looks so unreal that you wont raise an eyebrow about it anyway.

Page 8

Next page done, don't worry it's just page 7 is integrated with page 8, and don't worry about the tiny text on page 8, it's not important, maybe you'll get to read that once the chapter is done and I'll upload all the fully sized pages in a winzip file or something.

Edit: Added wallpaper onto the walls, changed the texts sizes to make them more readable... The smallest text may still not be readable ^_^` sorry if so.

Page 7

The cloud the girls been breathing in begins to take a toll on her, as she get's dizzy and passes out, Richard the doll tries to comfort her. You know when I look at the bubbles that are meant to represent how dizzy she's becoming, I think of these old cereal I remember trying, with colourful letters and they were almost like marshmellows... Maybe it wasn't a cereal.

So now you know, their clouds, not steam or smoke or any other gas you'd thought of, but why is it affecting peoples minds when they breath it in? What's it being tainted with eh?

Also, I've been updating the layout of this page a little more, as I figure out how the CSS is working in this page, I've also added a donations button.

I will soon add previews of wallpaper pictures that I might hope to give as incentive for anyone to donate, if you donate £2.50 I'll draw whatever you want. Just send me an email at Beta_ruler@hotmail.com when you do to ask me for what you want!

C'mon! XD this is the part where u should tell ur friends if u think this comic is up to scratch of not!

Page 5 and 6

Reading may become difficult, I apologise for this and will try to plan better in future pages on how to avoid making the dialogue bubbles so confusing.
(NOTE: in fact I am going to have to just split these comics back into 2 seperate pages, which might be difficult, but this size is just too small to read)
(NOTE2: Had to cut the picture in half and just hope they stick together without big line stabbing through the middle)
(NOTE3: Actually I ended up going to Imageshack! They let you upload images without resizing them, WIN! WIN! But I'm unsure if I'll put pages together like this again in the future, just colouring 2 at once was kinda tough, it's like you need to keep urself at an easy going pace)


They've returned to the girls parents house, now our strange protagonist makes his way into the house

It should be quite important, to me at least, if not to anyone making comics, to put some thought into each and every panel, many comics focus on expressing as much as they can, such as they give characters really dynamic poses or stretch their mouths when their shouting to better emphasize their action. I think I will try to explore emotion, if I could ever get as much emotion as even Oda who creates One Piece I would feel pretty good for my work perhaps, for he is able to put emotion into one piece, without needing to kill characters unlike so many other shonen jump series.

I was also tempted to put a load of insane babbling dialogue coming out of the antagonists dreamscape, in the 4th panel, but thought I'd leave it out for now, maybe later I'll get a better oppurtunity to put it in.

Page 4!

As the artists experiments on this comics format goes to the extreme, the odd antagonists start leading the story.

I think that what I'm making is not yet natural enough for my tastes, but as I continue to make these I hope that these elements will fit in, as practice makes perfect. It's all very experimental.

Page 3

As this girl becomes more exposed to this creature, she completely looses her grasp of what is even happening around her, it's giving off steam if your wondering, while glowing purple, just as the doll begins to glow yellow at the end, I am sorry, for this comic will be shrouded in mystery, madness, and when we get focused past this little girl there will be cryptic messages, the ammount of weird things that happen for the first time are many in the first chapter, it may leave some one thinking "what CAN'T this creature do?", but I hope we'll get to a point where you can realise just what this thing is doing, when you come to realise what it is.

Page 2

I felt really out of practice when I drew this, but I wish to continue doing this untill I feel into practice, then things will start to get stranger, as the reality their set in is warped by the creatures, and the dialogue moves from stiff wording to cryptic muttering that will ultimately hold the clues to unravelling the mysteries this comic will contain, even if their quite simple, this will be an effort to hide those simple mysteries to my utmost ability.